| Reviews for You say coincidence, I say bad luck |
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   Kaede Kitsurani chapter 5 . 3/12/2007 They're moving back? Whoa. Can't wait til the next chapter! |
| somuchformyhappyending chapter 5 . 3/12/2007 great chapter! Keep up the good work! bec |
| Love always and forever chapter 5 . 3/12/2007 update as soon as you can. you have done a great job with this story! |
| toxic-noodle725 chapter 5 . 3/12/2007 heehee. what a dare. |
| Another Lone Stranger chapter 5 . 3/12/2007 nice chapter. when do we get to hear more about jay? lol no rush. well i cant wait to read the next chapter! update soon! sincerely, ALS |
| Lady Wrye chapter 5 . 3/12/2007 I can hardly wait till the next chapter! ;) |
| hellokittygirl chapter 5 . 3/12/2007 Loved the chapter, very nice. ) I was kinda disappointed that there wasn't any Jay, though. hehe. It's a nice twist, though. D Update soon. -Lqd |
| hopefaithgrace chapter 5 . 3/12/2007 wow! The plot gets becomes more dense! If you would like me to help by editing or anything I would be happy to help if you needed it. Keep writing this story I love it. :) |
| Lovediamond15 chapter 5 . 3/12/2007 wo! great chappy! love it! - |
| pinkshades chapter 2 . 3/12/2007 OH MY GOD, you do it too. Why does everyone on FP do this? This is really annoying me... I'm not flaming, but I'd just like to point this out: [He turned. “My name’s Jay.” He said, smirking. “Tell them that too.”] [He said, smirking.] - IS NOT A GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT SENTENCE. That should read ["My name's Jay," he said, smirking.] Seriously, seriously... why does everyone do this? Hilarious concept by the way. I'll read it all when I have time. |
| Hydie chapter 5 . 3/12/2007 *becomes one of your many reviewers* I like it! Keep it up! |
| Hilmary-Oceans chapter 5 . 3/12/2007 Good chapter. Can't wait to see what Lydia does in the next chapter! Oh my God, the consequences are worthy of waiting for. xoxo Hilmary-Oceans |
| Shadow of the Black Wolf chapter 5 . 3/12/2007 I like it. Sucks that Jay wasn't in it though but I know he'll be in the next chapter. Can't wait. Waiting.. |
| Neaera chapter 4 . 3/11/2007 Ha wicked. Love it so far, keep it up! |
| hellokittygirl chapter 4 . 3/10/2007 Ooh! This is really good! I like! D Jay is an amazing character. ) hehe. -Lqd |