I'm super impressed that you are continuing with this story. It's lovely, nice and light-hearted, and a delight to read!

yay can't wait to read about jay

oh god this story is good

This is really good so far!

I cant decide whether to like or not hate her dad's fiance... She seems sort of fake. And Lydia doesn't like her too much. At least she has Jay to brighten up her day!

Haven't read this since... what... chapter 9? Still leaves me squealing. HAHA.

There are some typos, but generally, the chapters are good. All the 'action' distracts me from them.(:

Can't wait for the next (and all the future) chapters! PLEASE update soon!:D (Well, school, life, etc comes first, of course!)

i really like this! i think it's a very interesting and original plot and jay and lydia are just so cute together. :) update soon please!

wow! wonfer eat the he found!

Interesting. very funney. you should write some more.

I love Jay.

He's just adorable.

I'm hoping to see more of him in the next chapter. :)

And also, if I were Lydia, I would react the same way, I would hate Olivia. Haha.

Anyway, great chapter you have written here.

I'm looking forward to the next.

Wanna update sooner? :)

-dontneedyou

please update asap this is really good i cant wait for more

Interesting way to start a story...lol :] It may not be realistic but it made me laugh a lot! Haha sexy vase polisher, that was cute! Can't wait to read your whole story after my nap! :)

this was really good... what will they do now? how long will they stay please update asap

awesome keep going!

LOL! I loved when she slammed the door in thier face! And the whole awkward situation after! Where is her mother going while her father is there again?