Reviews for You say coincidence, I say bad luck |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey!, Hmm i wonder if you still remember me? Im Onella, we talked for a bit. was actually quite entertaining, we were a lot alike. But anyway back to the story. It was SOO good, loved it. It kind of was out of characters.. but that just made it all the more interesting. Cant wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow. I absolutely ADORE this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, how can you get 25 reviews in ONE chapter! That's just so wonderful! You deserve it though Narq. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow, I really like this~ You do the narritive voice exceedingly well... Great job! Narq. |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved the way they talked round each other in circles normally that pisses me off, but here i appreciated the comedic element to it XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, the first chapter was funny i guess now us ladies know what to do if we catch a sexy burglar stealing our stuff. though, ur probably right this story's very unlikely to happen in real life, because by the time we've got our jumper off (you know, to strip XDXD), he'd have legged it down the stairs, or killed the cat or something... also loved his excuse- i mean "vase polisher?" |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this chapter and i cant wait until you post the next one so please hurry . |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD That was an awesome story, I laughed so much. Omg...they kissed O.O And o.o should I have expected that? lol. Anyways, I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sigh. I really hope Lyd doesn't get hurt too bad. -mags |
![]() ![]() ![]() dudue i luv ur story! i was waiting for a new chpter for months man!1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw how cute...although I think I know who the culprit is, maybe Dominic? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this and the chapter is great but I just noticed you haven't uploaded in a while and I'm dieing to know what happens next. Please update soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update soon this story is awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw so sweet! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just love this so much! it brightens up my day to read it! |