Reviews for You say coincidence, I say bad luck
Rosey-Blue chapter 12 . 5/11/2009
hmm... he is very suspicious.

i cant help but feel that he's lying

love your story

update soon
all4hydration chapter 2 . 4/26/2009
o...
Lady Katreina chapter 12 . 4/21/2009
Thank you for updating! Ooh, what tension.
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 12 . 4/18/2009
love the story

cant wait for more

hope you update soon

-ifly*hugs*
Takuya.Hikari chapter 12 . 4/15/2009
aw! i am seriously loving this story! lol
ADG chapter 12 . 4/14/2009
i ohdee liked this chapter now u rlly see something forming btw them lyke legit i loved it and i rlly hope he turns out to be gewd!
Essevera chapter 12 . 4/14/2009
nice chapter update soon 'cause i know you want to!
violet-eyez chapter 12 . 4/14/2009
so if he isn't he robber than who is?
JadeDream chapter 12 . 4/14/2009
i dont think it was totally out of character, i mean they are going to have to act differently around each other at some point...but i love it! cant wait to read the next chapter, update soon!
natzxox chapter 4 . 4/14/2009
Hey sweetheart, I am officially in love with this story. I haven't finished reading the chapter, seeing as im at school. But I will finish up. I haven't posted mine yet, but I will soon, and I would love it if you would critique it. You have wonderful grammar. You don't get that very often.
LilYeti chapter 12 . 4/14/2009
Sometimes being out of character is good. If it's well written, which it was in your case. So, I really don't see a reason why you MUST re-write it, cause I liked it. And I love your story. Update soon.
JZK chapter 12 . 4/14/2009
Even though the chapte rmay be a bit out of charcater

atleast it has progress between Jay and Lydia
chocolatechipash chapter 12 . 4/14/2009
good chap although a little short and yeah it was a little out of character and sorta seemed like a filler but thanks for the quick update
jenjen-0 chapter 12 . 4/14/2009
Wow I have to say I was amazed this came out so quickly! And yay she kissed him. But ahh he didn't kiss her back. Poor girl. Ok, well keep up the quick updating, got high expectations now!
Emilea chapter 12 . 4/14/2009
lovely

i wonder who did the robbing! i think he pretended to rob himself to throw lydia off track!

:))

update son
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