Reviews for with broken wings
VELVETxKISSES chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
i have to agree with you on this one; i was drawn by the title; and captivated by the words. thank you for writing amazing poetry. _ mwah!
eldrin chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
The themes of your poems aren't much different than typical teen angst/romance, but your words change everything. My difficulty is that I can't quite pinpoint just what it is that makes this stand out - it doesn't seem like it should be remarkable. But there's a subtle - I hate to call a poem poetic, but that's what it is - poetic tone that pulls me in. Good work.