Reviews for Mother of the Heir
Safe Haven chapter 29 . 12/31/2012
Um, so are you done with this story? Cause I loooved it
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 3 . 2/9/2012
Thrilling chapter!

I had to reread the other ones as well, but it was well worth it! It was well-written to the point where I could see it clearly in my head. I haven't read many vampire-stories, so I cannot say too much in terms of genre, but this was a very nice way to begin! Off to read more! This goes into my favorite's list!

The reverse Edge Blade
J.L. Lofthouse chapter 8 . 11/23/2011
Please I'm begging you don't let her be the kind of girl that just gives up easily. He said their lovers yet he is having sex with other women and harming her! I hope she doesn't stand for it
ChemicalHazzard chapter 29 . 10/22/2011
Still waiting for this redux, seriously, it doesn't have to be perfect, just give me anything. i've read this version too many times now and there is still no end. please, I know it's hard cos i'm lazy too, but PLEASE post something
ReadingForKicks chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
I remember reading parts of this story years ago, but stopped useing fiction press till very recently! I looked everywhere for this story and finally found it yesterday! Unlike most vampire stories you made this one slightly different, with rebirth, flashbacks and irune doesnt give in to constance, even if she does get told off! Ive alsO been wondering if cassandra is still alive? And also what happened to cain in the car? And why cant they hear eachothers thoughts? So please update soon so we can find out :)

Harley
crissy19 chapter 29 . 8/11/2011
looking foward to this
Coyfluix chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Hey this is like the 5th time I'm reading this story, and it's still as great as ever! But what ever happened to Cassandra, Irune's baby? Is she a vampire, or was she mortal and died? Or was she half-and-half? I'm just wondering if the baby is still alive and when does she come into play in the story.
Coyfluix chapter 29 . 8/7/2011
It's amazing that you are finally going to update! I've been waiting since you've uploaded the author's note and I've reread the story, but nothing has changed. :-( so I was wondering, are you going to edit this story or post your edited version as a new story? And when? I'm dying to know the ending!
Serene Amethyst chapter 5 . 7/26/2011
The story is good. But I wasn't sure if you realized that Basque is old French/Spanish not Egyptian, and Tsukiko is a Japanese name not a Greek people. I think you should do a little more research.
Aphrodite's Antidote chapter 28 . 3/2/2011
Okay I'm not usually the one that reads vampire fiction this has definately caught my attention. Also I'm a huge history nut like the history that nobody really knows and you must dig for so I like the anicent times references in this. So please please update soon. I would love to know what happens. I've been up reading this all day on my day off from classes lol.
x.x buk wurm x.x chapter 28 . 9/21/2010
omg this story is AMAZING! UPDATE PLEASE
xxshellyx chapter 28 . 9/1/2010
Is this story going to be finished?
First Lady Lestat chapter 27 . 7/4/2010
I really, really really hope you continue this soon, it's so hard to find black heroine stories anywhere (getting real tried reading about pale skinned, blonde haired blue eyes busty chicks) especially well written interracial-pairing,supernatural ones, keep up the good work, and hurry back soon
Jay827 chapter 28 . 3/7/2010
wow you leave me with a short chapter and an unfinished story. please update it's almost been two whole years since you posted this half of a chapter. come back reread it please and complete this story that makes me angry, happy, and sad. mainly angry but that's just because of Constantine's attitude toward sex but honestly what vamp doesn't think of sex that way. oh and question: is Irune his actual 'mate'(as in that one person that vamps search for for their whole life and is their other half) or just a mortal he fell in love with? anyway, point is update soon i beg of thee :)
Jay827 chapter 7 . 3/2/2010
i wish she would honestly kill herself or become a full whore and hold out on Constantine because he is a selfish piece of shit :)
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