|Reviews for Flying Leap|
| ChildeOfChaos chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
You would have known a poem about a fish could be so sad? I liked how you wrote fall, nice touch. The first stanza is great.
| sharks don't sleep chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
This is a great way to sum up life. A great journey that, for most, ends proudly. The only mistake was a 'then' isntead of 'than' : "At least it is better/ *than* swimming in circles"