Reviews for Perfection's Shadow
Kannibal Klehmenteen chapter 1 . 1/26/2007

This is spectacular.

I definitely understand where you're coming from, only kinda in reverse...

My sister is the bad kid and I can never be bad enough for her and even when I get better grades then her, I get punished for longer.

Being younger sucks.
Dollface Dead chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
This is great. I like this part:

always half a step behind

and forever underneath.

Keep writing.