|Reviews for Background Bitchings|
| the Berserker chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
Oh... this is sad. So, of course, I utterly adore it. This is a really touching piece of poetry. It's definately being added to my favourites. :)
I've been looking for good poetry writers to critique my work. Could you do that for me? Flames are totally appreciated.
I'm sorry if this poem is really true, but it's fantastic. I'm looking forward to more of your work.
| SapphireIris chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
Ooh... angsty. The only error I see is a relatively small one, "one's" instead of "ones." And that's all for the errors. And this poem is very aptly named! I try to avoid the types of people described.
I don't usually go for poems, but this is cool, if a bit depressing.