Reviews for Two Hearts |
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![]() ![]() ![]() El Doctor es un bigote...yes the doctor is a mustache...:)i dont know the word for idiot so mustache will have to do...oh well...update soon-ish have fun in NY |
![]() ![]() ![]() pretty good |
![]() ![]() ![]() travis has a gf? does that mean, he's not interested in kat anymore? update por favor! ~mia |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG!That was so good!Make more!U rock! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa! I was expecting both of them havin' wonderful time in the dancefloor...i mean "sweet dance"... But, that was great..it kind of left me hanging for awhile. ) hope i can get a reply! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was a great story! im glad they make up. poor jordon... peter is an ASSHOLE! and your leaving for NYC? as in NEW YORK CITY! thats cool i live there xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, that was ucte yet sad cause peter left jordan... i liked it though! great job , can't wait for more1 have fun in NYC! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHERE"S THE REST? |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story! ) going to NYC? cool i live in NY ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! They're going to prom together! so cute! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() good update. only mistake was, when kat and bridget were talking, you said "Then Jordan changed the topic," which you know, would be normal if peter hadn't cheated on her with said best friend. lol just thought you would want to know. ) anyways, UPDATE ~mia |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I want more! (Meaning: I hope you update soon! _) Congratulations on the graduation! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter, a few typos, but otherwise very good. I like her conversation with Emily. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the way that you used kat best friend to make peter look more like the jerk he is and i cannot wait until you do an update and congrats on your graduation :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow great chapter... stupid Peter. and I dont like Jordan.. I'd probably never be friends with her again. Arent you supposed to ask your friend if its ok to hook up with a ex? (in this case they arent really even exs!) anyway.. congrats on the college thing! |