this is a good chapter too. this is a great story. im putting u on my alert list, and adding this "best friend love" thing to my C2. update soon!

... who the hecks jaime? random time to put a new charactor in and not explain there significants! lol over all though, good chapter

LOVE the story so far! The characters all have likable personalities. I loved how you did the little snippets of events every four years in the first chapter. Uh-oh Jordan likes Travis too! O The best friend liking your crush thing is always interesting...can't wait to see where that goes. Hehe Clean Teens! Do you watch One Tree Hill, by any chance? lol. Anyway, great job on your first two chapters! Can't wait to read more! D

-HopelessDreamer07

good so far. she seems to have a good relationship with her stepmom, i like that. so she's suprised about jordan and travis, a little jealous too, or is it to soon in the story to tell?

Love et! *gives millions of cookies as a form of bribery for another chapter* :D

that was really good. i liked the transition of her attitude between each segment. had to go back and check her age though at one point but overall you did a greet job with the story and plot. Travis was done really well too. his personality was spot on in respect to the way boys develop at each one of the ages presented. the switch to first person was flawless though i wouldn't have put that authors note in the middle of the chapter. i have gotten used to people doing that all the time here and on fanfiction so i was able to just skip right over it but some people get thrown off by that kind of thing and it pulls them out of the story. other than that minor bit of criticism i loved and cant wait to see what else is in store for your characters.