just wondering, will you be continuing this story?

cause so far, i like it.

hoping for an update! :)

please don't tell me you won't continue the story, think of dani she deserves a little happiness doesn't she ? do it for her ! please!

Okay, I just finished reading your other story 'Life is Beautiful', and I realized that Jessie's last name is really Bathas. Sorry about that. :)

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Haha, I like it! I didn't think being in Dani's POV would be so entertaining. Just one thing, though: I thought Jessie's last name was Davidson...? Was that a mistake or am I missing something here?

Well, anyway, keep posting stories! I love your writing style.

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Are you gonna update? im a fan of L.I.B. and this is such a grreat chapter.! PLease continue!

awesbut stil., it maes sense

kiu!

ciao

Samanthaome! not the sequel i was looking 4

I love the idea for this story. Cant wait to read more :)

Will this ever get updated?

Interesting start. Poor woman, though the idea of her having an over-protective younger brother is pretty cute lolz. Looking forward to reading more, so please please please UPDATE SOON!

very interesting. love the way you write. )

can't wait for the next chapter! D

awesome chapter

LIB was an amazing story

and i know this one will be too ]]

Suit-Guy wouldn't happen to be the bar tender would he? Cause they both called her 'Doll', and seriously, how many people do you know that say the word 'Doll'?

Oh well, awesome story, look foward to the next chapter!

p.s. Pls R&R my stories.

update!update!update!

I'm not reading anymore of your writing, because you are not a reliable person. When I am reading a story I don't want it taken down when I'm in to it. This is not a site to advertise a chapter to a book you might publish. This is intended to share stories and improve you writing skills.

PLEASE UPDATE!