Good write. Keep it up, please?

I love this story. I really want to read the rest of it. I love the main character, and Michael sounds interesting. Are you planning on posting more anytime soon? :]

When I first clicked on this story,

I didn't really know what to expect. The description had many things going through my mind. I'm glad that I did click on this story because it's great - I mean, it reminds me a little of that movie Just Like Heaven but it's still great. I love your style of writing because it's realistic and humorous.

I don't like Rick that much because Rick is that guy who just crosses the line completely - - he reminds me kinda of Cartman from South Park but Cartman's better :D. Anyways, I can't wait for you to update if you do and this is going on my faves.

I'm not sure what I was expecting when I saw the summary for this story - a hormonal ghost, obviously, but it intrigued me enough to click on it.

Best decision I've made today, I think. Lisa is so REAL! Even though she can't really remember anything about her life, you make her current existence interesting, though it's not that great (if she gets her kicks from telemundo).

You don't really discuss what she does during the day while Michael's at work, but I think we're all so anxious for their interactions that we don't care. Or at least that's where I'm at.

I can't wait to see how the Coffee Girl plotpoint unfolds - obviously, Lisa is Coffee Girl, and since this is a romance, it'll be interesting to see what Michael's reaction will be.

I loved the "I'm not asleep, you are" conversation.

Overall, you are a genius - kudos for an awesome story.

I can already tell that this will be severely entertaining. I'm intrigued by the way she is drawn to him, and her courage and utmost desire to make him feel her. (I also like the fact that she can see him with his guard down, for some weird reason.) My only small qualm about this chapter (and hopefully *not* the whole story) are the snippets of scenes being presented, rather than a one complete scene. These snippets just create brief images of the characters and plot, whereas a full, whole scene might round out both Lisa and Michael's characters, as well as carry out the storyline you intend to divulge. Thus, in my opinion, I think this chapter would work better as a prologue, since it is short and basically just an introduction to two characters.

I'm really looking forward to quite a few things. In terms of characterization, I want to find out who Lisa was when she was alive, and I want to find out why she's a ghost and just what this has to do with her connection to Michael. And of course I want to learn who Michael is and how he'll react to this ghost in his house.

Slight correction before I submit this review: "button down" I think should be hyphenated.

That's it. I'll be reading the next chapter soon.

-McQuinn

Okay, so I don't know about you, but I think you really need to update! lol

Yupo, this is coming from the girl who updates just as sparatically as you..or so it would appear.

So please update, the story is coming along interestingly, and I'd love to see what else you've got tucked up your sleaves!

You've got an interesting story here. I can't wait to see where you're going with this, so I hope you update soon (on any day of the week, really). Michael sounds very appealing, by the way. ;)

-Pearl

GAH, SHE REALLY IS COFFEE GIRL! What other strange tie-ins are you going to work into your story?

You need to finish this. I don't want to die thinking up my own damn endings, please and thank you. And this is a pretty cool story. I can tell you I'm not accustomed to your pacing, but it's not bad at all! You've really got me hooked on the plot, if you haven't noticed.

I really hope you update this story. ((Please!))

Okay, when I started this, it was so not what I was expecting. It's intriguing (and I'm not making much sense right now, so this is going to be a crappy review - sorry). I feel like some of what's going to happen might be obvious, but even if it is, it'll be okay, because your writing style is well-developed, your characters engaging, and overall, it's just fabulous.

Nice work, and I hope to see more!

ok, I already reviewed chapter three, but I wanted to review again because I was forced to read chapter three again because there is no update, and then I realized my reviews have been very brief. And I love this story! So I'm going to try to make longer reviews in the future.

SO, I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter, but it really will be depressing, right? Because she obviously IS coffee girl, but she's dead, and Michael will be sad, and she will be sad...but maybe the fact that she's hanging around his place means she can do something about this? I have a little hope still, illogicaly.

lol this story is hilarious/intriguing.

i love how the ghost battles with the fear of rejection even when she's dead. would it be trite of me to say that it shows that even ghosts have feelings? lol i should be writing for hallmark.

anyway, please update soon!

Yo I like your story...which is weird because I usually don't like stories like that...

I hope you add more

Mwahaha. It's her! The ghost girl is coffee girl!

Ingeniuous!

Sorry for not reviewing sooner. And my apologies for not answering your question from the previous chapters. I'm open to a new chapter any day that's suitable for you. I'm always around to read - it's my reviewing that leaves a lot to be desired.

I loved this chapter. I'm not sure if Michael was actually channelling Lisa's questions, or if he was dreaming, but it was an interesting new fact about 'Coffee Girl' that was brought to light.

I adore the shower scenes. Lisa's observations of Michael are so hot, lol.

It's great that Lisa watches TV. It makes her appear to be less of a ghost and more of a person. It fits in well with her personality, and her not knowing who she was and her disbelief in being a ghost. It's like she just wants to be normal.

Rick is such a guy. He's annoying, but he's great for the story, and great beside Michael. The contrast between the two is awesome. Rick's this skirt-chaser, and Michael, while all hot and sexy, is uneasy when it comes to the opposite sex. It's awesome. I like how calm Michael was when he kicked Rick out, and I love that they're like the type of guys who hate each other, but couldn't bare not to have each other's friendship.

And to quote Lisa: Interesting. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where this leads.

That is DEFINATELY how guys are when they watch a movie.

Good use of foreshadowing and made me not like Rick.

Constructive Criticism: UPDATE!