|Reviews for Forbidden|
| Maddam Redder chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
"waitwaitwait, hold it!" Loved that line! Lol. Awesome oneshot! Very nice! ;)
| nick666 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
| BandNerd98 chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
hehe that was sweet _
| Alleigh Connors chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
-drools continuously- Good work! This was short, but sexy as hell; oh gods, I'm your fan now~ :D
| Pixie611 chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
| brookeworm chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Odd... good, but odd.
Hahaha, I have nothing against plot-less smut, but it's just kind of disorienting not to even know what kind of relationship Wander and Conquede have. Is Wander a servant? A slave? ... A toy? Or just a younger, curious friend?
Hahaha, You could deffinately elaborate this into a story, if you wanted to.
| broflove chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Very nice. c:
| BlaznFangurl chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
Wander let his eyes drift down the man’s body, taking in how tight his stomach looked, and how his hips jutted out, slightly woman-like, and how his huge, dripping—waitwaitwait, hold it!
(First OFF i LOVE THIS LINE, IT MADE ME ROTFL)
Next off this is very good, very cute, and very yummy, I throughly enjoyed it think it should have way more reviews! I have a oneshot yaoi forum and would love you to come and promote this or any other oneshot yaoi you may have_
Here is the link: /myforums/BlaznFangurl/649674/
| MCRshortstackedme chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
hot and steamy!
| NicolaiChernyshev chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
O.o wow! That was great! You have great talent in writing keep up the good work x3
| kirarin242 chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
i loved it,it was really good!
| Fatal Desires chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
nice i love it! _ funny too and really good )
| SMGrimm chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
very good. i love it! good descriptions too. you have yaoi talent my friend. haha. *pats your back*
| Ellie Raye chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
omg that was so well written , and totally hot! I loved it!
| Uke-Badass chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
~Drools~ Me wuv this (giggles)