I like insanity. And Arthur seems to have a lot of it. This story leaves me so confused but in a good way. Everything and everyone is so insane, confusing, mysterious. I never know whats going to happen next. I have a feeling that Arthur is indeed the one who raped Cecilia though. This story makes me so scared, so scared for Steven...

This is really interesting. Hope u update soon and finish it

This is fascinating! I have no clue what is going on which I love. This is the first story of yours that I have read and I'm looking forward to more. Thank you. DDx

:O I like this fic :3

OMG!

Holy crap, an update! Thanks so much for continuing this story. It's one of the most gripping I've ever read. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

The anticipation is killing me, here. I really need Arthur and Steven to do something.

interesting turn you've taken with Arthur. Very creepy.

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This brightened my day, im so happy another chapter:D

OMG! OMgOMGOMGOMGOMG! An Update This makes me so happy, you wouldn't believe it lol. I'd just about given up hope that this would be continued, and it is. ve very happy th

Omg an update, finally and hallelujah. Thnx for coming back!

Oh my god. I'm so happy this updated. I was scared it was going to be an author's note saying this story would never be completed. But nope, it was a chapter. I really just want to see more of the dynamic between everyone and what happens to our lovely protagonist.

Another chapter? Hurray! I can't wait to have some answers as to what is going on with Arthur and the others. If I was in Steven's position, I would seriously annoyed for how little he knows about everything happening around him, but he seems kind of calm. Anyway, I'm still loving it!

My god this story is a gorgeous gem. Just finished re-reading for who knows how many times last night. Because the updates are so sparsely scattered (more please? :) ) I actually forgot what the story was about (sorry! I read way too much on FanFiction and barely on FictionPress so I was confused) and had to read chapter 13 again before chapter 14. But honestly I remembered what I loved about it so much and actually ended up re-reading the whole thing before the new update so I could prolong the story (curse me for reading incomplete stories). Truly you are a gifted writer, that much I can see by the detail and transition of your story- personally, I think there's no story like yours! Not sure if this is good or bad, but it really has all the kinds of things I like in it (very logical, strong-willed character who can think for himself: sexy, mysterious guy who is obsessed with said character in a disturbingly adorable infatuation; and lastly an unwillingly attitude that gradually eases into affection, as I know it will because you promised!) This is my favorite online unofficial kind of story, even among the loads I read among FF, so I hope my admiration truly moves your heart (or your pencil, preferably the latter) and know that I'll always be supporting you! Cheers for hoping this review isn't too long, considering I can't tell because it's a mobile review (gosh it takes too painfully long to write these...but I simply had to get it done).