Reviews for Stick Girl
winteria chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
O_O ... owow.
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
This piece is so brutal and piercing! You used such strong, powerful words and everything came together so well! You are very talented and I admire your work! Amazing job! I'm adding you to my favorites. )
Wylloa chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
this is so... amazing. I love the repetition and imagery.

Beautiful.
AllyCred chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
I love this its just so dark...

The repitition at the beginning and end of each line was just pure genius, i couldn't tear myself away!

This is a beautiful piece and i especially love the ending, very powerful!

Well done!

Lotsa Love

AC
bitterlyysweetchoco chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
Interesting! Normally I don't like poems like this but this one was interesting.

Imagery was good and present
polka dots and addictions chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
this is an /incredibally/ powerful poem. the bits of repetition that you've used at the begining & end of each verse work nicely, & the ending just completes it in that bittersweet way. lovely work, & thanks for the review. Bex xx
Later chapter 1 . 1/29/2007
pretty.
MarvellousMarvin chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
wow. i really like that; i like the brutality of the words. it's something that you see quite a lot amongst girls, and something which i reckon probably affects quite a lot. you cover the topic well