Reviews for Victoria Building
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
I like the relation between the first and second stanza... I like it alot... the differences between when youre young and olf is awesome... great piece
battousai24 chapter 1 . 2/1/2007
Vague, but it still makes quite an impact. Victoria building? Isn't that the 4th to 7th grade building? O.O;;
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 2/1/2007
Wow. I love how you wrote that. It made me remember about a friend as well. The structure and how you broke it down to just one word in the end. Wonderful.

Keep it up.
lackluster chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
lovely. the words have such sincere emotion. the "Thanks" at the end makes me smile.
Imagination Complex chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
There are enough times that I've met someone again after not seeing them for years. This reminds me of exactly how I felt at those times. Even though I'm only one step further along the road than I was back then.
laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
i finding a hard time figuring out what this is about...but strangely, im finding a fine time figuring it out for myself...

you did a good job...

truly yours...