|Reviews for Admissions|
| Dollface Dead chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
Okay, this is just plain awesome. A-W-E-S-whatever. It's not very often I run across stuff like this on this site. Definately going on my favs! :D
Usually I can pick out one line I really like about a poem and be lukewarm about the rest, but this was just excellent all over. Bravo!
| Emma the Paradox chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
Wow. Amazing. Creative. Unique. Inventive. Thoughtful. Awesome... just... wow. This totally blew me away. Each line fits so perfectly, and though one could point out that stanzas seem to follow different rhythms, I like that. It gives the impression that there are a lot of different people admitting and such. Well, at least that's the feeling I got from this.
I'm having some trouble being constructive here, I know... Heh. Well, I suppose a bunch of praise must suffice then. This automatically goes on my favorites... good job. :]