Reviews for The Goddess and the Wolf
KamreyGames chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
This is nice. Reminds me of a song, good job. Song: David Guetta- She Wolf.
The Red Raven chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Vancariad chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
This is a beautiful poem! The flow is nice, and it almost has a Shakespearean ring to it!
Aquilarealm chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
i like this. interesting structure and idea. the first three words "Run wolf run!" caught my attention immediately. but the 'cried the maiden girl' sort of threw me off. the sentence structures could be written better to suit the form, ex. “Run wolf run!” cried the maiden girl,Her voice ringing loud and clear," - try:

run wolf, run!

The maiden's voice

rings loud and clear.

this way, the poem will be better structured and easer to read. Also, you don't have to put maiden girl, since a maiden is a girl.

OVERALL, i liked reading it. nice to read something different for a change:)
magnusthewolf chapter 1 . 1/29/2007
i liked this a lot...very much in fact...very nice wording throught the pice though at a few points it seems a bit off (sentences i mean) but it's not a big deal. i liked the emotiona and the dialog was fitting. i really enjoyed the way this was portrayed...;) great job...going on faves...magnus