Reviews for shoot
DOORphrame chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
I like this style too. It's balanced, yet crazy too. You did a good job experimenting.
kenansense chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
Damn. I felt each word zoom through my head and ionize a few of my brain cells while it was in there. Very good; I honestly can't pinpoint anything specific about this poem that I like, I just like it.
magnusthewolf chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
very vivid imagery you have here.

i love the line "you'll be hungry later" has a good stop for that sentence...

interesting format and i liked your comparassons :)

and i especially loved the way the ending just added a total finality to the piece which really worked quite well! great job! :) magnus
katrina X.O chapter 1 . 1/29/2007
I definitely like the new format. The poem in itself is good as well, lots of nice imagery. Or scary imagery, but it's still good ]

Katrina xx