Reviews for Self Destructive Drowning
Frore chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
Favorites! Wonderful poem! The imagery is so nice, as odd as that sounds for this subject matter, especially this line, which someone else also like:

"And the endless calm is the only thing certain

Where smooth white walls can hold me

And choked bubbles sing lullabies

Like a sailor lost beneath sea."

Delicious. I hope to see more poetry and stories from you!
Toxic.Industrial.Waste chapter 1 . 1/29/2007
M, I love angst.

Favorite lines:

"And the endless calm is the only thing certain

Where smooth white walls can hold me

And choked bubbles sing lullabies

Like a sailor lost beneath sea"

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Sounds like you have so much pain, so much heartache, that all you want to do is die. As if the sound of the word "death" is a comfort to a lonely soul.

Loved every second of it.

Erica Sky
DXM Junkie chapter 1 . 1/29/2007
beautiful, i think this flows very nicely.