Reviews for Working It
serwaverider chapter 1 . 8/6
Not crap. Clean style. I like it.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12
I like it! I think it could have been a little longer though. Maybe tell about their dinner and such, letting it all progress.
Variante chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
Short and sweet, like candy :)
samsophie22 chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
chocolate.affair chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
fadi25402702 chapter 1 . 7/12/2012

Okay well it wasn't as lengthy (thus more realistic because of more background between the two characters) as "Five Moderately Easy Rules..." was, but it was nice nonetheless.

I have to commend you on that smart technique at describing Jared's looks around the beginning. A writer has to put in descriptions of the main character seamlessly and with reason, not choppily and like, "He is five feet four inches and he has short blond hair with blue-green eyes."


You did it very well and smoothly flowed it within the words so I have to commend you on that.

Okay so I love dimples and you gave Casey dimples! SO CUTE! Gosh that was amazing...hehe.

Overall, I love this story because it was really cute and a very refreshingly new idea. Thanks for writing it! :D
Eryn Foster chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Not crap :) It was so good! When I finally found a slash without constant grammar and spelling mistakes, I was so happy. Even though it was short it felt like it came full-circle, and tied up the loose ends. All in all, very good :)
spacedoutghost chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
Not crap. Adorable :)
Verito chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Not crap at all! Amazing cute cute cute! I love it :)
lost in pale blue chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Very cute. I'm always up for some fluff :)
lijuan chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
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beeks.the.bear chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
why do his shoulder's sag in relief?

the frustaion and anger are well described.

very well done.
Jaded Devil chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
Simple and cute. You've managed to captivate me with the first paragraph! Love the ending too; Casey's one of the cutest "brat" characters I've read about. ;)
honey splattered brains chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
berneynator chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
Very cute! I love the comments about working at a waterpark and how boring it is- I swear, there is nothing less interesting than lifeguarding. At least, as far as jobs go. Great story!
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