I love Love LOVE this!

ok I commend you on having the motivation and guts to write this and finish it but I just have to say something... that love note, man! I mean come on! You could have done so much better, the potential! I'm just going to ignore it for now and move on, hopefully the "pwease" and similar language style doesn't continue because I was really hopeful for a good, serious read and I got that fluffy crap. Great job on everything else though.

- Person

Oh my god! I can't stand Sebastian! I mean I didn't like him for the start but it gets worst. And considering the many appearances he's made he's definitely gonna be who Winter ends up with and I'm just not down for this. This site is bully/victim fall in love sotries over and over again and I'm sick of it, it's fucking unhealthy. And yes Sebastian IS a bully.

Wow...this story blew me away. Like, let me just say this; i go through a lot if stories and usually only get three chapters in before im bored. Really, im so picky, if a story is even slightly boring i will stick my nose up at it.
This though? I loved it, beyond words! All the feelings, the setting, characters..just, everything! Its so brilliant, and i just love it so much, i was on the edge if my seat, and feeling warm and fuzzy at different times. It made me think too, and i need to thank you so much for this!

It was such a sweet story!
Thanks for writing it!

What an absolutetly lovely feel goodstory. 3
Just the right amount of angst and heartbreak and fluff for the story to still stay sweet. (Although in my perfect world their parents would've reacted a lot better than they did, but that is mostly because it's really incomprehensible for me for anyone to not accept homosexuality in general and their own children especially.)
And then the grand finale! :O (nosebleed)
Sweethearts, both of them!

this story is amazing and it should become a published piece

Oh god it better not be friggin Sebastian or else I will punch something.

I loved this story sooooooooo much!
Sweet and realistic, thank you for writing It!

My, my, my! Nice romance! Nice protagonist! I would be in love with your Winter Orion if only he was a real guy! Daaamn, outside he was all mysterious but inside his voice was aww adorkable!
Sebastian was fine too! I like how happy he was finally finding his true love!
Thanks for sharing!

YES! that was awesome

:D Loved it!

You have a very light and breezy writing style that's very fun and free flowing to read! This story was cute, but I think with a little more plot input and poetic prose it could be a lot better! :)

You seem to have a habit of making statements with simple lines like 'it was' or 'I am'... I think instead you should put some more effort into elaborating the point; instead of just stating the fact of the subject!

It was that, and the interchanging of the character's core personalities that bothered me most about this story... but overall, I think it has great potential! A definite 7/10 as is, right now!

Keep working on it some more! :7

-RPS

PS: I hope this review isn't disheartening, I'm constantly changing things about my writings, to the point I've had writer's block for months now! :P Lol, really the only story of mine I consider complete no one wants to read!

I'd love to hear you're thoughts on my, "The Scent of Vanilla."

Very cute story :)

I like him already ]