|Reviews for Cigarettes, Stalkers, and Other Orgasmic Objects|
| person chapter 2 . 12/26/2017
ok I commend you on having the motivation and guts to write this and finish it but I just have to say something... that love note, man! I mean come on! You could have done so much better, the potential! I'm just going to ignore it for now and move on, hopefully the "pwease" and similar language style doesn't continue because I was really hopeful for a good, serious read and I got that fluffy crap. Great job on everything else though.
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/31/2017
Oh my god! I can't stand Sebastian! I mean I didn't like him for the start but it gets worst. And considering the many appearances he's made he's definitely gonna be who Winter ends up with and I'm just not down for this. This site is bully/victim fall in love sotries over and over again and I'm sick of it, it's fucking unhealthy. And yes Sebastian IS a bully.
| sage1111 chapter 7 . 1/15/2017
Wow...this story blew me away. Like, let me just say this; i go through a lot if stories and usually only get three chapters in before im bored. Really, im so picky, if a story is even slightly boring i will stick my nose up at it.
This though? I loved it, beyond words! All the feelings, the setting, characters..just, everything! Its so brilliant, and i just love it so much, i was on the edge if my seat, and feeling warm and fuzzy at different times. It made me think too, and i need to thank you so much for this!
| Naana chapter 7 . 12/16/2015
It was such a sweet story!
Thanks for writing it!
| Selfinflicted Poison chapter 7 . 11/21/2015
What an absolutetly lovely feel goodstory. 3
Just the right amount of angst and heartbreak and fluff for the story to still stay sweet. (Although in my perfect world their parents would've reacted a lot better than they did, but that is mostly because it's really incomprehensible for me for anyone to not accept homosexuality in general and their own children especially.)
And then the grand finale! :O (nosebleed)
Sweethearts, both of them!
| anonymous chapter 7 . 10/25/2015
this story is amazing and it should become a published piece
| Fobbster chapter 2 . 10/17/2015
Oh god it better not be friggin Sebastian or else I will punch something.
| jacob chapter 7 . 5/14/2015
I loved this story sooooooooo much!
Sweet and realistic, thank you for writing It!
| chocovic-chu chapter 7 . 4/4/2015
My, my, my! Nice romance! Nice protagonist! I would be in love with your Winter Orion if only he was a real guy! Daaamn, outside he was all mysterious but inside his voice was aww adorkable!
Sebastian was fine too! I like how happy he was finally finding his true love!
Thanks for sharing!
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/21/2014
YES! that was awesome
| ConqueredKing chapter 7 . 6/24/2014
:D Loved it!
| rockspapersnscissors chapter 1 . 4/18/2014
You have a very light and breezy writing style that's very fun and free flowing to read! This story was cute, but I think with a little more plot input and poetic prose it could be a lot better! :)
You seem to have a habit of making statements with simple lines like 'it was' or 'I am'... I think instead you should put some more effort into elaborating the point; instead of just stating the fact of the subject!
It was that, and the interchanging of the character's core personalities that bothered me most about this story... but overall, I think it has great potential! A definite 7/10 as is, right now!
Keep working on it some more! :7
PS: I hope this review isn't disheartening, I'm constantly changing things about my writings, to the point I've had writer's block for months now! :P Lol, really the only story of mine I consider complete no one wants to read!
I'd love to hear you're thoughts on my, "The Scent of Vanilla."
| Krimsyn chapter 7 . 12/12/2013
Very cute story :)
| MiranDuranDa chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
I like him already ]
| RubyRed22 chapter 3 . 8/14/2013
Okay. When Winter's secret admirer mentioned MCR...TOTAL. FANGIRL. MOMENT! Teenagers is my favourite song on the record. Actually, the whole Black Parade album is pretty freakin' amazing anyways. Their new stuff (that was probably released after this story was is finished) is just weird though.
Getting sidetracked now... I swear I got more out of this chapter than that. The dialogue between Sebastian and Winter was fucking awesome.