Reviews for Tap on the Shoulder Song Version
partingissuchsweetsorrow chapter 1 . 9/14/2007
Wow, that was great. You're a really good writer so keep up the good work.
MiScHiEvOuS sMiLeS chapter 1 . 7/7/2007
wow this is very very good. i hope it turns out to record well like u want it to since it's well written. good luck and keep writing!
akacz chapter 1 . 2/5/2007
Beautiful. If I may once you have, I'd love to hear the recorded version.
roachpiece chapter 1 . 2/5/2007
i can't tell you how much i loved 's got a nice short and sweet chorus wich is my style too and the verse about the silly smile almost made me cry. if there weren't people around right now then i would but that's because it reminds me of her. anyway, thanks for the acknoledgment at the end and Lynerd Skynerd kicks ass. see you later.


just a forgotten memory by now
Isabella22 chapter 1 . 1/30/2007

Awesome job. Wonderful lyrics.