|Reviews for familiar bones|
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
wow, that was beautiful. i love the last two lines, they were so poignant.
| Perfectly Paradox chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
Wow. I love the consonance of speckled and knuckles. That is simply delightful. I love the simile, "he breathes like a mountain top/ (each breath is enormous)" Nicely done.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/3/2007
Beautiful - the stanza describing how he breathes like a mountain - breathtaking. Lovely. I'm in awe.
| Doxology chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
peace and love
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 2/27/2007
there's a familiarity just reading your work. i wasn't sure you were still posting...well i left a little while ago but i'm still reviewing. hehe
| lackluster chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
i'm wondering what the inspiration for this was. i love it, really. especially the ending, "dipped down low in the february blues/find me inside myself, and let me find you" is so beautiful. great work here. truly amazing.