Reviews for The Train
Kindre Turnany chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
O.O

The emoticon says it all. Well, not really.

Towards the beginning you used "was" too much, for me anyway.

I rather liked Scum...

It upset me that you used the ending as your summary though. I already knew she was gonna die before I read it. And that's just plain mean.

Other than that, it was amazing.
Kirona of the skies chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
Wow.

Wow, wow, wow.

This is so...vivid.

I am very, VERY impressed.

It is not often I come across authors with this sort of talent.

Well done. Well done, indeed.
Abby Ebon chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
Wow, intense. Nicely written, I'm not sure if they had those kinds of trains or not, and I guess you wouldn't really know for sure if they did or not, being as it's not something you'd noramlly survive, and not something anyone would talk about. None the less a good read, and you have my thanks for reveiwing my poem as well.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
that was the first thing i thought, you know? that line, the purging the world of filth. that was the first thing i thought.

the ending was good. abrupt, but good.

i don't know why i can't ww2 stuff. when they start talking about concentration camps in poland, the first thing i think is always 'well, that was my great grandma and my great grandpa'. it's disgusting, you know? it's disgusting how humans are so damn cruel. 'you're taking showers'. yeah, they tooks showers.
darkink1991 chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
I like it. Its caprtivating