Reviews for Your Lips So Close To Mine
the Berserker chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
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UWAH!

This just made me want to cry and cry and cry! It was horrible and wonderful and jesus you've mixed up all my words. /sob/

This is really really good, and I'm adding it to my favourites

(PS - this was in return for reviewing CaF)
Wowingglow chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
A lovely story and idea, though the pacing could have been a little better between the break-down and the death and you broke from the second-person present-tense in the middle, but I enjoyed it in a really strange sort of way.