i love the story so far; its soo exciting ]

cant wait for more!

OMG yay! i love this story...youd think that after her being rescued the story would end and wed be dissapointed but NO u kepp going :p

thats just well SET...anyway i juat wanted to say that i think that your story is prety Awesome and all but it be EVEN Beter If you ya know umm maybe updated agin befor anyone (me) thirows rocks at her computer heh heh heh YEAH so please update id love you forevr and ever and ever (okay i highly Doubt that but mehh...)

Whats next, whats next.

Hey, I know you said that after 5 weeks, you would be able to update regularly (twice a week), but it's been 10 months. So, my question is...are you still planning to finish this story? I love it, personally, and I would love YOU if you'd finish it. please..? I even added it to my favorites. :D

aw, it's been a long time since you've updated. ): i hope you plan to do it son. i wanna see what happens next!

Ah.

I had to review again because I looked at my review for Chapter 19 - Your Author's Note

... and I put "you should of"

! I hate it when people do that.

I must correct myself.

It's "You should've"

Pretend I didn't write "of" instead of "'ve". K?

Plus. I totally agree that the American stuff might need a teensy bit of work because I'm sure they don't say "dreadful" well except for old people.

I'm pretty sure. I'm not American but we're pretty much the same, at least I think so. Unless they're from the dirty south or something... or if they're "New-Yawkas" (don't they talk like that though?)

Anyway. If you're wonder who the "we're" is it's Americans and Canadians. I am Canadian. Ugh, I sound like that beer commercial now. Yuck... If you don't know what I'm talking about, ignore me.

But I digress (I do that a lot, don't I?)...

I love your idea, plot, characters. Everything really.

I never suspected Becca and Cal once.

I assumed that they had a secret relationship...

and then I thought that Becca was trying to force Cal to admit he liked Alyssa or something, something cute like that.

But that twist you threw us, wooh, I was so off.

Anyway. Update soon. Love ya. (really)

Let's just say this, I seriously want to marry you.

Now, I haven't proposed to many people so you should be honored...

So honored that you'd update tomorrow. And I'd come back to see a beautiful new chapter.

Cause damn, you jam-packed all this drama and action and now you're gone.

Because of exams and a guy? Attacks! We're more important.

Hahahaha. I know how you feel. School is stupid. I don't like it.

But we have to go to it. So good luck with your studies. And please update soon.

Or I might have to go into a corner and cry. If I go emo, many people will be surprised by the way, cause that ain't my style, yo.

So watch out. I might appear somewhere near your house. Just for a warning.

Don't be scared!

Ahaha. Really though. I hope you find time soon because I find your list of excuses to be inadequate.

... As in you should of said something about a dog. I love excuses that include pets.

I wouldn't have minded if there was a dog. . .

I realize that I'm rambling so I'm going to cut this short: PLEASE UPDATE! I BEG OF YOU!

D

AHAHAHAHA!

...I swear. This is the best.

Except. Chow is actually spelt "Ciao".

D

GAY COUPLE! HAHAHAHA!

Ok. I had to put that, it just made me laugh really hard. I'm already very interested in the story... now back to your story. I'll continue this review later.

So now that I've finished the first chapter all I have to say is; you are simply FUCKING HILARIOUS!

I totally love you. This is the first I can actually identify with "LOL".

Cause you so made me lol.

You sure know how to capture attention.

you lie.. 5 weeks my butt! haha anyways this is a great story even if it is a bit fast at times.. but anyways its always nice to find an author from the UK too.. im from Northern Ireland by the way..

update!

I started reding this a while ago on another website, but you had stopped updating... but when i found a story with the same title i assumed it would be yours... and i was right XD

please please please update soon!

Uh-Oh!

Jealousy is a no-no )

lol. Look's like Jem got TO attached )

And I THINK Ben is gay or likes Aly D

GAHH! So much drama, but i lovve it ]

Ah, I actually teared (just a little) after reading this chapter. I could really feel Alyssa's anguish during the part when she was coming to terms with the fact that the people she thought were her friends, actually weren't at all. Good job. :]

cute story