Reviews for Said the Spider to the Fly
TheRedWulfe chapter 7 . 8/21/2009
Interesting, a few spelling errors is all you have to look for.

TheRedWulfe chapter 5 . 8/21/2009
O! Love it!
TheRedWulfe chapter 4 . 8/21/2009
The plot thinkens. HEHE! I love it
TheRedWulfe chapter 3 . 8/21/2009
Cool. Flutes rule! I would know, i play one and the saxophone. I really like this story.
TheRedWulfe chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
angel-Janna chapter 7 . 12/19/2007
A few small things before I get on with the lavish praise: new line, new speaker, watch your grammar and punctuation, and above all... if it feels like it doesn't wanna be rushed, then don't rush it. Let your story just do what it wants!

Other than that, dear...


She has a vmapire connection, a past she can't remember, an awesome name and some pretty kickass ghoulie and ghostie bashing. Possible friendship/romance, a creepy vampire clan leader... and some really beautiful moments. Love the flute/clarinet playing part!

Keep it up

Janna X
x-kit-x chapter 4 . 2/27/2007
This is a really great story and it's captivated me straight away. I can't wait to find out what happened in her past and I think he's the missing link... Update soon :)
tearitrightup chapter 3 . 2/4/2007
wowie. update soon!
Skyline Stanza chapter 2 . 2/2/2007
it's getting better, but i think you may need to seperate a buch of this into smaller paragraphs. Makes it easier to read.
Skyline Stanza chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
Well, this seems interesting. BUt can you please, please add more detail and maybe make it a bit longer?