Reviews for A moment with a mind collapsed
trippiekittie chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
hey...would you mind if i cited this poem as a link to one of my characters? she's a fallen angel who's crime was falling in love with the wrong person, and this poem fits her plight wonderfully. i'd give you full credit (and reccommend you other work, which i really like), it would basically just be a little extra blip in her profile. i'd understand if you say no, but i just had to ask.
xbreezex chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
wow...

those were some truly deep words. I really do not know what to say except I liked it. the blood parts turned me off a little but thats me

"with eyes of fury

without a foe to name

though we keep falling

we are still the same"

that's my favorite part. Good.

and you said you couldn't write _
fading innocence chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
Hi, I added this poem to my C2. I liked it a lot, pretty good. Sry I haven't answered, I was off playing Maplestory. (Can you blame me?)

fading innocence

'dazzle me with your hypocrisy'
LuckyCharm.698 chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
Very intriguing and very unique.

Put me in a thinking mood actually

Very kik!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
I like this, well written. Keep it up!

Anna _