|Reviews for A moment with a mind collapsed|
| trippiekittie chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
hey...would you mind if i cited this poem as a link to one of my characters? she's a fallen angel who's crime was falling in love with the wrong person, and this poem fits her plight wonderfully. i'd give you full credit (and reccommend you other work, which i really like), it would basically just be a little extra blip in her profile. i'd understand if you say no, but i just had to ask.
| xbreezex chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
those were some truly deep words. I really do not know what to say except I liked it. the blood parts turned me off a little but thats me
"with eyes of fury
without a foe to name
though we keep falling
we are still the same"
that's my favorite part. Good.
and you said you couldn't write _
| fading innocence chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
Hi, I added this poem to my C2. I liked it a lot, pretty good. Sry I haven't answered, I was off playing Maplestory. (Can you blame me?)
'dazzle me with your hypocrisy'
| LuckyCharm.698 chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
Very intriguing and very unique.
Put me in a thinking mood actually
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
I like this, well written. Keep it up!