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| eldrin chapter 1 . 2/24/2007
The opening is excellent. This poem masterfully examines the thoughts following ended romance - the questions, the doubts. "a twist of bitter lips and kisses" is lovely, bitter-hinted imagery. Good work.
| VELVETxKISSES chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
that's beautiful, glad you like my stuff. _