Reviews for Pass us By
A. E. Custer chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
I really like it; it has a nice flow and rhythm to it!

keep up the good writing
Inkspilled chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
Sorry, last review was cut off. XP It's nice, but sometimes it rhymes, then it just stops. It seems a little confusing, but the ending goes along really well. :)
ChildeOfChaos chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
This was really beautiful, I was excited to see a new piece by you :)