|Reviews for The Crosswalk|
| HappyHowler4myLuver chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
This is brilliant.
There was a small typo in the third paragraph, but other than that it looked perfect.
I have to cross a busy intersection to get to class everyday, and the dangers never cease. This story made me smile, and now I hope a car almost hits me (again) and this time I might just laugh before I finish crossing.
Beautiful story. I loved it.
| guppylove chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Nice. I am afraid I didn't spot the metaphor.
This is interesting though. When I was young, I had recurring dreams of stopping at a intersection and never going across myself. I never really thought what it could mean.
| Marie Berden chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
This was... hold on, I'm not great at reviewing. Let me compose my thoughts...
I'm a loser. Anway, this has a great, surprisingly upbeat message! Cheered up my day! I wish she did laugh. It would've scared the driver.