Reviews for The Sound of Rain on Stone
Freya chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
Wow I'm in love with your story. It's very well written.

I think its wonderful you've done a story reflecting the Roma, since they seem all too often forgotten about in regards to the Holocaust.

Thank you for this piece truly.

Freya.
Shadows in the Fire chapter 1 . 2/1/2007
Hello, fathful reviewers!

Yeah, I just posted this, but it is from three years ago, before I learned that stories need flesh and blood to be real. I wanted to post it, because I wanted to touch on the subject of the Roma people. This was a paper for a class on Genocide that I had, in fact! Therefor, it isn't really a true story. Thanks for the reviews anyways!

-Amber
Kahn the Hun chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
I never even thought about the gypsies. There is a new point of view for me. Thanks for the review and time for constructive criticism! (Disclaimer: I don't even follow my own advice so don't feel oblidged.) So, you seem to be on a higher writing level than a lot of people, therefore i have little to say, but... your story and plot were good, however, as in most writers, you didn't fill it in with real hearty meat. Where is the detail, I saw lots of emotion, but, I wasn't really feeling it. Keep it up!