|Reviews for Brightworks Cab Co|
| Duh Red chapter 1 . 8/8/2000
O.K. ...How do you describe this? Surreal? I love it...It's gotta be fleshed out...have some adventures and such...day in the life of stories...And I can see I'm in there some where...Take care tho' to make the city unique...don't let it fall into cliche...And the puns...Some one get a cardiologist for the heart of the city...
Problems? a few...too rushed but like you said it's an idea in the making...but I can see there's more between the lines than space...Beauty unknown to angels...where ever did you get that? Take a dance in the details and waltz them out in all their splended squalor...More...O'yeah...Mind if When My characters are back in cities they take a ride in a Brightworks Cab?
Also this sounds like it could easily become a shared universe...what do you think/envision?