Reviews for Fatal Temptation
purple x pen chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
the emotions of this piece are conveyed very well.
phantom66 chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
great flow of rhyme! loved it!
Im gonna make it rain blood chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
wow nice I love the title and it's content really great XD
Jen H.M chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
I love the style of this poem. It flows so well without losing any of its meaning. Be honest, though, did you need a dictionary to come up with so many words that end in -ation? I would have. ;)
Ainu chapter 1 . 2/1/2007
Wow. I don't think there's ever been a poem I could relate to more. I love it. D

*added to favorites*
CARRIE chapter 1 . 2/1/2007
FUCKING AWESOME! don't know why, but you have such charm XD
Master Shu chapter 1 . 2/1/2007
Nice work with the words. This one sorta reminds me of a few realationships. Keep up the good work.

MS