i like this.

maybe it's just because it's honest

and i guess i also like the direct flow of this.

anyway, nice job.

-ty.

Wow.

What else is there to say, really?

I love the last line. "The house wins."

Just... Beauty.

Excellent; I love the parallelisms and the hidden context :)

This is an amazing analogy, well written!

btw, i love your profile quote :)