Most amazing, plot, setting, characters, and all. This would be so awesome as a T.V show ,b so awwesome and most of all the feels . Edkie (yes! that's their new ship name) is soo cute 3 KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! WHOOAH I LOVE THIS SO MUCH, THANK YOU. 3 3 3

Ah, ye olde helicopter parents.

Is it just me or kiernan is becoming more of a yandere stalker?

I have just noticed but in paragraph 4 you use 'new' where it should be 'knew'

Wow, loved it. I read it in one go and it kept me interested throughout :)

Poor Kieran he just got caught in a world he knows nothing about but I hope he makes friends and develops his powers..
Lord Colwyn seems an interesting character and his animosity towards Asita seems like an interesting story.

Great start and kieran seems like an interesting character who is nice and gentle towards animals. I'm hooked

This is really great! :) Your story is really a great piece. 3 I'm so thankful that you made this story and its sequels. I've read the whole 4 series, and it didn't make me feel boring while reading the books. :D Awesome! The story has a heart! I'm looking forward for a sequel. :) Thanks again author. (y)

I love this story! I can't wait to read the sequels, and your other stories! Best- ;)

This is truly extraordinary, it seems worthy of publishing. Excellent job.

In a previous chapter Kieran said he had never heard of far-seeing, now he remembers his mentor taught him how to block it?

Love it

Well done! Quite engaging, well-written, and original. Makes for compelling reading!

I still like it. But as good an idea as the whole 'conditioning' and rogue wizard stuff is, the concept is quite muddled and rough around the edges.
Besides - or rather; despite - that, it's an interesting world you created.

I really like it so far. The concept is good, and it's easy to read. Good job!