Reviews for Haunted By The Person I Hate Most In The World |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's been two years. No chapter and no epilogue? What happened? Did you forget? I love this story, though. I've actually been reviewing for a couple years now, but I changed my name. Four times. I have identity issues. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this chapter. I'm glad you found a way to include the conscience without over-doing it, you know? It's good. Really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh! Kissy Kissy. Lol. Great chapter. I LOVED the length. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was much better. I liked it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eh, this chapter was okay. I think it was way too much conscience and not enough actual drama/dialogue. It seemed really immature as a whole |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it once again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great second chapter also! I really liked it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great first chapter! It really drew me into the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() iwantachapternowNOW act soon as in act NOW UPDATE |
![]() ![]() ![]() GASP *glares* how could you |
![]() ![]() ![]() i so knew it |
![]() ![]() ![]() yea! i heart ryan please do more in his POV...pwease... . |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES IT IS SAD BUT CUTE |
![]() ![]() ![]() Report cardsick I certainly don't miss those days. Looking forward to reading the end of this story. It's good for the most part, but there are a few weak spots that could use some work. Not quite 'plot holes' per say, in every case, but weak links, and I'd like to see the story come out without those weak spots. I think it would be a much stronger read then, and even better than it is. Happy writing. |