|Reviews for In Theory|
| BloodyDestiny chapter 2 . 2/12/2007
E...He is so obsessing over Alex. This is going to be interesting I wonder what Alex has to say to him. Alright then see you next week in the reviews.
| American Schokolade chapter 2 . 2/9/2007
I like that you're introducing some of Jamie's friends. I guess it helps develop character.
Good chapter-I would suggest, however, to introduce more events that subscribe to his "theory," so that they can pop up later in the story...just because I like stuff like that, so you don't actually have to do it.
This may be one of the most disjointed reviews I've ever left, but...yeah. Liking the story. Keep updating!
| Violent Pornography chapter 2 . 2/9/2007
Amazing story. I love Jamie already in his weird way
ah deep fried Mars Bars...I believe I have also waited outside a chip shop waiting for one of those
hahaha keep writing, you're really talented
| bansira chapter 2 . 2/9/2007
A.D. seems quite interesting. I hope he'll enter the scene in some other chapters too xD;
I can't exactly explain why, but the story is intriguing (sp?) and kind of catchy. I really like it
| BloodyDestiny chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
Nice. I think I am going to enjoy this. He is just denying that he is attracted to the man with the pirate tattoos. I'll be bakc next week to review the next one.
| American Schokolade chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
Nice start-I really like this so far. I was wondering, though... Where are you from? Just curious, but I was thinking that might help put this setting in perspective.
Anyway, I love your characters and the premise, especially since his "theory" is kind of true sometimes... Well, I'll be looking forward to more!
| bansira chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
seems to be a real cute story going by the 1st chapter! I really like the main character, he seems fun. and i totally have to agree with the theory too xD;
| KC chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
I'm hooked. Jamie is an ass, which makes stories like these all the more entertaining.
Alex is a better man than I, apparently. I wouldn't have cleaned up some stranger's vomit AFTER he banged into my car, lol.
Good first chapter.