Reviews for In Theory
BloodyDestiny chapter 2 . 2/12/2007
E...He is so obsessing over Alex. This is going to be interesting I wonder what Alex has to say to him. Alright then see you next week in the reviews.
American Schokolade chapter 2 . 2/9/2007
I like that you're introducing some of Jamie's friends. I guess it helps develop character.

Good chapter-I would suggest, however, to introduce more events that subscribe to his "theory," so that they can pop up later in the story...just because I like stuff like that, so you don't actually have to do it.

This may be one of the most disjointed reviews I've ever left, but...yeah. Liking the story. Keep updating!
Violent Pornography chapter 2 . 2/9/2007
Amazing story. I love Jamie already in his weird way

ah deep fried Mars Bars...I believe I have also waited outside a chip shop waiting for one of those

hahaha keep writing, you're really talented

bansira chapter 2 . 2/9/2007
A.D. seems quite interesting. I hope he'll enter the scene in some other chapters too xD;

I can't exactly explain why, but the story is intriguing (sp?) and kind of catchy. I really like it
BloodyDestiny chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
Nice. I think I am going to enjoy this. He is just denying that he is attracted to the man with the pirate tattoos. I'll be bakc next week to review the next one.
American Schokolade chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
Nice start-I really like this so far. I was wondering, though... Where are you from? Just curious, but I was thinking that might help put this setting in perspective.

Anyway, I love your characters and the premise, especially since his "theory" is kind of true sometimes... Well, I'll be looking forward to more!
bansira chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
seems to be a real cute story going by the 1st chapter! I really like the main character, he seems fun. and i totally have to agree with the theory too xD;
KC chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
I'm hooked. Jamie is an ass, which makes stories like these all the more entertaining.

Alex is a better man than I, apparently. I wouldn't have cleaned up some stranger's vomit AFTER he banged into my car, lol.

Good first chapter.
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