Reviews for In Theory
Rue Street chapter 18 . 3/14/2009
I dont think third person is your strong point. And yes, I do think it was a bit cheesy of an ending. :P I never know how to feel about things going full circle and all that. But other wise I really loved the story! I would have liked to know about what happened between A.D. and Jaime, but I guess its not a necessary thing. I think he would've been okay with it in a 'my best bud is gay, and I didnt know it' sort of way. I think he would've come around. Cant expect everyone to want to be okay with it at first. Its kinda of a smack really.

I think you have one more full length story I've yet to read and then I'll go back to the waiting game with Noah. But before that I really ought to write this final paper for my law class...which actually made me laugh out loud when I read that A.D. was taking law of all things.

Oh! So you seem to really be a fan of the name Sebastian arent you? Since there's a Seb in this as well. Not to mention the whole Anthony/Antonio thing as well.

:D Alright, now I think I've finally said everything I've meant to say. Again, it was a great story and wonderful way to spend my Friday and Saturday morning! -FG
Rue Street chapter 16 . 3/14/2009
This is a long overdue thought, but I just remembered. What's a chippie? Is that like a fast food restaurant? -FG
Rue Street chapter 13 . 3/14/2009
Demons. Right, it had to happen at some point, but did Jaime really have to deny himself so harshly? Especially with Alex right there? Jeez...that's bastardly behavior. I mean I know he was in a slight panic and was trying to save his ass but honestly...look now then. He's already regretting so much. Coming out (sorta), breaking up with Sophie, saying such harsh things in front of Alex...really.

And poor Alex. That had to hurt so much. He JUST finished telling Jaime how hard he had fallen for him and Jaime goes and does this shitty thing. How can you really be with a person who hasnt come out yet? Thats gotta be hard, because in the back of your mind you've gotta keeping thinking that he'll do things just like what Jaime did, and then try to beg for forgiveness after its all past. Crap situation, lovely for the story's drama though. -FG
Rue Street chapter 10 . 3/14/2009
Poor Soph, I figured she'd assume Jaime was going to propose. That's gotta be utter hell. I cant even imagine. But she's better off. They werent really compatible anyway, gay thing aside, they fought a lot about seemingly stupid shit. -FG
Rue Street chapter 9 . 3/14/2009
Poor Jaime, he's hurting and I love him. But he deserves it so this is a good lesson for him I hope. And I guess I got my dance with the younger guy...just didnt think he'd be such the stereotypical twink. But he made Jaime cry! Sorta...well, he was a part of it I'm sure so I dont think I like him anymore. -FG
Rue Street chapter 8 . 3/14/2009
Cant wait for the explanations on this one. Though, Alex is a flirty bouncer, sometimes they do shit like that. AND, who the hell is JAIME to talk? Doesnt he have a girlfriend? You cant harass someone for cheating when you're doing the same bloody thing. Whatever. :D I hope the next chapter is as entertaining as I envision it to be. I am SO glad I stumbled onto your fiction! -FG
Rue Street chapter 7 . 3/14/2009
Another thing I didnt mention when it first popped in my head. The boy gay thing has been rather distracting for me.


What the hell? There's something there and I knew that BEFORE this chapter and its obvious drop that there was something going on. Wonder what it is...Alex is great. Seems a bit...dunno yet. Thats what further reading is for. -FG
Rue Street chapter 6 . 3/14/2009
Ah guilt. Well that was obviously going to happen. You cant just determine to sleep with a guy and not feel guilty about the next day when you've got a girlfriend. At least if you're not a complete bastard, and I dont think Jaime is.

Normally I feel bad for the one getting screwed in all this (no pun intended of course), like the boyfriend or girlfriend of the cheating bastard, but I dont really like Sophie. Not that I hate her, I'm very uninterested in her. She kinda seems like bubblegum. All sweet and enjoyable for a bit, but not so much later on. Maybe I'm being harsh. Then again I'm not exactly reading this so that the hetro's will find love in the end, you know? -FG
Rue Street chapter 5 . 3/13/2009
I actually kinda liked James the older. He was a bit strong and flamboyant, but the world needs people like. If nothing more than to tell others of their existence.

Wouldnt have minded if Jaime danced a bit with the cute younger boy though, just to stir up trouble you know. Drama, that's all I really want. I leech onto it. -FG
Rue Street chapter 4 . 3/13/2009
I havent mentioned (because I never remember to mention these things when I want to) but oddly enough I like A.D.'s name, or at least that they're initials and that they're not common initials. Too bad he seems like a bastard as far as relationships go, at the same time if the girlfriend doesnt do anything about I cant blame the guy too much. -FG
Rue Street chapter 3 . 3/13/2009
Thats the problem with fucking ipods. They're so damn easy to lose. Apple planned that crap. But anyway, aw they're first kiss! Came natural too! I can see that Jaime is going to be a very interesting character. :D -FG
Rue Street chapter 1 . 3/13/2009
So Alex has three tattoo's so far? I think I counted that right. And I think Jaime is just being paranoid. Yeah, he's got a good point but its not exactly an unheard of thing. When you dont know the name of something, you dont see it/hear it everywhere. So of course the second you DO learn of something new like a phrase or a band its fucking everywhere. And its not because its taken over the world, its because you're a moron and didn't realize its existence sooner. :0)

As you might be able to see I dont exactly have the patience to calmly wait around every five days for an update on Noah. So I figured I'd cruise your profile and see what other things you have to write. So I'll be reading this now and I can tell I'm really going to enjoy myself. Guys in tats sex on a plate. -FG
Poptart Guava King chapter 18 . 3/3/2009
-_- random ending? but w/e :D i enjoyed that. very fun and i
frolic-horror chapter 18 . 3/1/2009
So, what's the deal with the tattoos? I Alex's dad a tattoo artist or something like that?

Lovely story. I loved the guys :P
Poptart Guava King chapter 13 . 2/24/2009



oh my gosh *cry~*
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