|Reviews for A Perfect Mistake|
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
Sara! Long time no see! _ How are you?
I really like the rhyme scheme of this poem, it's awesome. Well written poem. I really could feel just so much. Fabulous descriptions. Always be positive and keep writing!
| fuzbrat chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
"just thought it was too crappy". . .you thought it was crappy? *smacks you upside the head* I love this poem, keep putting up any 'crappy' work you may have cause I think it's pretty god at the very least. Keep writing.
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
flows well and i like the "contradictions/opposites" in the lines
beautiful ending; sad and wistful
| magnusthewolf chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
this is wonderful. i love the flow and the decriptions are great! awesome job, write on! ;)
| je suis une pomme du terre chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
OMG! A NEW ONE! I absolutely LOVE the contrast...Caressed with warmth, beaten with sticks/Drank in a goblet, ate upon bricks. Tender Hostility