Reviews for power
eldrin chapter 1 . 2/12/2007
"(God i’m letting you possess me)/as i let you undress me" is gorgeous wording. Flows so easily, feelingly off the tongue. The simple statements of this poem are quite effective in conveying the guilty-for-liking-it-this-way feeling. Good work.
she smolders chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
There's something sensual beneath the surface of this poem, and I quite like it. Take care.
magnusthewolf chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
interesting and compelling of the middle sentences caused me to pause but it's no big deal...nice touch with the italice, i think the last one on a seperate line would be a bit more interesting. good job
VELVETxKISSES chapter 1 . 2/3/2007
o. baby that is SO true! i hate it when men are addictive... *sigh* lurv ya chica! _
tuieri chapter 1 . 2/3/2007

almost sounds like a song.