Reviews for Warning Signs
xfail chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
The way you write is incredibly innovative. I have a feeling that it's influenced by no one's ideas but yours. Your imagery never fails to interest me, the arrangement is sublime, and yet you manage all this without being pretensious.
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
I love the simplicity of this poem - the image of someone idly stirring fruit into yogurt, and contrasted with the abstractness of the rest of the poem. Interesting. Keep writing! :)
Next Exit chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
i really like the way this poem is organized.

"I inhaled basement air,

a blank TV screen,"

very cool lines.
kakeley chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
i like your technique! nice job!
august harlequin chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
Hmm. was simple. It was nonchalant, or until the word "suddenly"; that word seemed to break apart from the rest of the poem. I liked it. It was an enjoyable read. I especially loved the first stanza.
Frore chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
Haha, wow. When I first read the summary for this poem, I expected it to be a very... Almost pretentious piece? Then the word "yogurt" struck me and I realized the casual nature of it, which is not a bad thing. Expressive and descriptive! Keep it up.