|Reviews for Warning Signs|
| xfail chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
The way you write is incredibly innovative. I have a feeling that it's influenced by no one's ideas but yours. Your imagery never fails to interest me, the arrangement is sublime, and yet you manage all this without being pretensious.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
I love the simplicity of this poem - the image of someone idly stirring fruit into yogurt, and contrasted with the abstractness of the rest of the poem. Interesting. Keep writing! :)
| Next Exit chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
i really like the way this poem is organized.
"I inhaled basement air,
a blank TV screen,"
very cool lines.
| kakeley chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
i like your technique! nice job!
| august harlequin chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
Hmm. Well...it was simple. It was nonchalant, or until the word "suddenly"; that word seemed to break apart from the rest of the poem. I liked it. It was an enjoyable read. I especially loved the first stanza.
| Frore chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
Haha, wow. When I first read the summary for this poem, I expected it to be a very... Almost pretentious piece? Then the word "yogurt" struck me and I realized the casual nature of it, which is not a bad thing. Expressive and descriptive! Keep it up.