| Reviews for rebirth |
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   Lucid Nonsense chapter 1 . 8/3/2007 Haikus are not my favorite, but with those few words you managed to paint a picture so vivid it came to life. |
| lastwrites chapter 1 . 6/8/2007 Interesting... and beautiful in it's purity. |
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/6/2007 I like the rhyming and the alliteration.. beautiful imagery |
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 3/4/2007 Oh, wow, nice haiku. "nascent" isn't a word I hear too often, so that's a nice change of pace. I love the color you've made this sunrise - it's simply breathtaking. Beautiful. Keep writing! :) |
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 2/11/2007 Quite lovely. |
| lackluster chapter 1 . 2/6/2007 it's the simplicity that makes this a great poem. it seems like a classic already, like i've read this a hundred times and still i can't get over it. |
| Basara chapter 1 . 2/6/2007 phoenix arising? nice... |
| Plastic Roses Never Die chapter 1 . 2/4/2007 beautiful. i love the last line. you could work on the flow of the second. |
| notated descant chapter 1 . 2/4/2007 I know I'm picky on this, but the second line has 8 syllables when there's supposed to be seven ) The setting this haiku paints, however, is very descriptive and vivid. I don't believe I've ever heard of the word "nascent" before... gotta remember that one. Good work! Keep on writing! |