Reviews for Standing On the Edge
jes chapter 14 . 10/27/2010
Glad you're back! Can't waiit for the next chapter so update soon )
TheTruthAboutForever chapter 10 . 10/26/2010
You know I have to tell you that Snow Patrol's Set Fire to the Third Bar and Seether ft. Amy Lee's Broken are a pretty amazing fit to this story. Throw in some Marjorie Fair and it's perfect. Lol. I love this story so much! In fact I'm staying up late on a school night just to finish it. I have to say though that I'm a little disappointed that Jere just kinda disappeared. But I do absolutely love the twins, even though I haven't seen much of them lately, they seem awesome. And if I had the same mom as Javier, I can sort of relate cause I'm spanish as well and have had my mom say some of those things to me, I would snap and slap the bitch. It must be horrible to have only downs in your immediate family.
intellectual titmouse chapter 14 . 10/26/2010
i personally thought it a very pleasant surprise to see this or any of your stories updated. as a writer i feel your pain; sometimes we lose touch with our characters and it kinda hurts. especially characters we lived with so long and so deeply that it's like giving up hope for all mankind when you don't have that inspiration any more. well, maybe that's just me. lol. but either way, i can't be mad at you for your hiatus. sometimes, that may be needed. your update was excellent. it was still javi's voice and very convincing. you're an excellent writer. your stories ring true and vibrant and i can't wait to see more.
ess3sandra chapter 14 . 10/26/2010
yeah! update. lovely!
Weirderest chapter 14 . 10/26/2010
I absolutely loved it! I got SO excited when i saw that it had been updated and you have absolutely not lost Javier's voice; I was sitting in my physics class today and someone had written 'You are the only exception'on the desk and that got the song stuck in my head and when i came home and saw this it was perfect the way it goes with the chapter and how Rosaline feels. I think this chapter was beautiful and real and I LOVE Javier and his line about his heart beating erratically around Rosaline. Major swoonage!
renegade01 chapter 14 . 10/26/2010
surprised but also excited to get an alert from you. despite the long time gap, i still feel like i know this story and i love how determined you are to carry on writing. its much appreciated no doubt by your fanbase, moi included.

the line where javier says to rosaline why she can't collect him was simply too cute for words. loved the innocence in it. again, thanks for continuing to write. ;)
NeitherNora chapter 14 . 10/25/2010
Glad to see you're back! It was a bit hard to remember what was happening in the story, but a good chapter nonetheless. I hope you stick around to finish it!
Hong chapter 14 . 10/25/2010
I'm thankful you've come back after a long long long hiatus and you haven't lost me as a reader but I will have to reread the stories to even know what's going on in this chapter. If you're really afraid of plagiarism, have you thought of joining Plagiarism Haven with Myrika and the others? That's one possibility or post them only on livejournal and have it be friends only. I will be really disappointed if I don't get to read them but these stories are your creation and you should do what's best for them. If it means taking them off fictionpress, then do it. I fully support you & I just wanted to say thank you for these characters!
echo-echo chapter 14 . 10/25/2010
Your writing is beautiful and your characters have such depth. Your author's note was touching, I just read this story today, and I fell in love so its a shame to hear what you have gone through. I am glad you are going to keep on writing.
Mariposa-12 chapter 14 . 10/25/2010
You're ALIVE!WOW! I had to go back and read from the begining since it had been so long since I read this story I wasn't sure where it was.

That was a good chapter and i'm glad you're planing on updating again cause i really like this story.

Javier was pretty much "himself" but I see his loving and caring side coming out more easily. I lovehow he likes all the girls now and treats them as his own friends. ;) thanks for the update!
Lea Brown chapter 14 . 10/25/2010
Yay! your back I'm very happy.I can't wait to read more chapters.
Guest chapter 14 . 10/25/2010
So sorry about the plagiarism thing! That must be so discouraging! But I am glad you decided to start writing again. I thought you disappeared on! And you should continue Nobody Said It Was Easy but put a spoiler alert warning! Just a thought :) I can't wait for you to update your other stories too
Mikariangel chapter 14 . 10/25/2010
OMG! thank you so mug for still being alive :D I love your stories, always will, and yesterday, I was just rereading about Nadine and thatcher... And then this morning I got the email about the update on this and I was like.. Is this a joke or something? Thank you so much for updating. I know this whole plagiarism thing hits hard. Have you heard of plagiarismhaven? It's a bunch of authors who have also been plagiarized. Check out myrikas page. But if you are really scared, you shoulders that. Btw, anychance of you updating analytical calico soon?
YourStar91 chapter 14 . 10/25/2010
i love this story, i read all 14 chapters today, but hey, i needed something to do since im home because from school im sick :S, and when i started on this story i couldn't stop reading it :D.

i get how Rosaline feels, i'm accually at a state were i'm terrified of getting my heart broken, that's why i never even try to hit on guys, or talk to boys that i find really cute :S, rejection is never fun :/.

aww, Javier's a great guy, why cant there be more of them were i live :S.

Anyway, i'll definetly be waiting for next chapter :D
Fierce85 chapter 14 . 10/25/2010
OMG OMG OMG you've updated! I love you! I'm so glad u decided to take a risk from all that plagiarism crap. I thought you quit Fictionpress for good! I was like no way she's gonna come back after a year, but you did and you made me happy! Now all I need is Nobody Said it Was Easy! Seriously, I've been waiting for years to hear about more of my Thatcher and Nadine: my two FAVORITE characters, btw!
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