Reviews for Sunshine
felicia13 chapter 1 . 5/11/2007
"intoxicating and nostalgic." Great line. Just ... really, really great.

The whole thing zings of 'true love' sort of circumstance. Oddly endearing (I don't usually go for these sorts of love poems) and warm. I like warmth ...

Felicia.
riotmaker chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
i love this.

you write with beautiful simplicity.

[plusfavorites].
Elenive chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
I can feel this as a perspective from a child whose brother or family member is spinning them in circles until they get dizzy. Maybe this is a memory. Either way, "intoxicating and nostalgic" work perfectly. Great piece.

Sorry it took so long for me to review.
Synn s chapter 1 . 2/8/2007
It's not bad!

Intoxicating my mind, don't you? jejeje

p.d. forget my english please...
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
Ah, just beautiful. Keep writing.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
"Your voice in my head,

enveloping me." - Jesus, that line is fantastic.

The whole thing just flows; it's stylistic and sweet and romantic, pretty. Well done-this is beautiful.

- Noelle
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
refreshing and uplifting.