|Reviews for Incomplete|
| CynChan chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
I love your word choice. It's absolutely beautiful. :)
Hmm. I liked..oh heck, I liked all the lines. XD
| Lithiumesque chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
Good concept. I love free verse... the only thing I can suggest is perhaps beefing up the vocabulary. Some of the words and phrases ring as cliche, and with simple tweaking the poem could be that more beautiful.