Reviews for You Don't Deserve Me
BlankSlate chapter 2 . 3/31/2009
I'm very happy that you decided to write up a story on Parisa, but I'm also a little disappointed that it appears you won't be continuing it (since it hasn't been updated in a year). I think what you have now is very good (with a few minor stylistic and grammar errors) and wish you the best of luck if you decide to continue; I would certainly read more.
Anelir-sensei chapter 2 . 2/25/2009
YAY! i was hoping you guys would do one on Parisa...despite the fact that he acted like a total bitch, he would make a good story. and for some reason, he has grown on me lol. cant wait for the nect chapter
DefineNightmare chapter 2 . 12/8/2008
Usually I would be laughing my butt off because of what karma is doing to Parisa...but even in the other story I felt attached to I'm sad.

I really hope that bastard doesn't hurt him (well too much...because I'm pissed for what he did before)...

please update sooN!
BlueHeart102 chapter 2 . 11/25/2008
When r you guys going to continue these stories? I love them so much and you guys are driving me crazy. I hope there will be some update soon. plz I been checking these stories like almost every single day *cry*
mary chapter 2 . 9/18/2008
i really hope your not stopping there this could be a real great treat ...well neways hope you plan on updating soon
Itsa Mia chapter 2 . 9/16/2008
the chinese have nothing on you when it comes to torture; you can guess i'm urging you to update. i love the angst you throw in, unrequieted love is my favorite theme, some how...
Itsa Mia chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
Love it, it's fierce. you make me sorry for parisa, but i know you'll make him happy.
JtheChosen1 chapter 2 . 9/6/2008
great work here! luv it so much!
forbiddenstars chapter 2 . 6/5/2008

this whole zercan thing...


a lot better written than i had given them credit for...congrats on the good work!
Murks chapter 2 . 5/9/2008
Happy to see this continued. Yay!
plumblossom chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
This is my favorite of the Zerca stories: Parisa's problem is interesting!
ToEatTheseApplesFromYourEyes chapter 2 . 3/30/2008
Oh, poor Parisa. I really enjoyed this chapter
Midnights Scream chapter 2 . 3/30/2008
Karma is getting Parisa though I do feel bad for him.
hesfb chapter 2 . 3/5/2008
oh! great chapter! this story is hot hot HOT! While I love all of this zercan series, this is fast becoming my favorite- I like the interesting backgrounds of the two characters and seeing Parisa develop into a real person...

Hope you update again! (because it made my day this time round!)
Freak-of-Spade chapter 2 . 3/5/2008
Nolkeir is such a...a goddamm * ** * * *!

And Parisa...OMG when i was reading You Belong With Me i absoutely HATED Parisa but aw, now i just can't hate him and i feel so sorry for him and aw BLESS, NOLKEIR START LOVING OUR LITTLE SLUT RIGHT NOW OR ELSE I'LL CUT YOU!

pass on the message to him, will ya? XP

update soon cuz i love this! it's one of my fave you wrote! well, all of the zerca stories are 'one of my fave's but whatever.

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