Reviews for Stray
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 4/11/2007

I haven't read all of your poems, but I'm slowly working my way down the list. Very slowly. Sorry that I haven't reviewed for all of them - haven't got enough time all of the time, so ...

Anyway, for THIS review. I love this piece. It's amazing that none of the rhymes sound forced, which I sometimes find hard with this sort of poem (not that I'd be able to write something this brilliant anyway). I really love this piece - it's wonderful!

Ki o tsukete nee